This is a good paper, but I want to point something out to you, which we will spend more time on in class. When you use a direct quote from an outside source, you should put it in quotations, and show the reader where you found it. We'll work on this later. You used great sources, but I don't know what material you got from what source.
I liked your interview. It must have been a helpless feeling to be in Greece when this was happening at home. I'm glad the Greeks were so kind and supportive of your "Nana."
This is a good paper, but I want to point something out to you, which we will spend more time on in class. When you use a direct quote from an outside source, you should put it in quotations, and show the reader where you found it. We'll work on this later. You used great sources, but I don't know what material you got from what source.
ReplyDeleteI liked your interview. It must have been a helpless feeling to be in Greece when this was happening at home. I'm glad the Greeks were so kind and supportive of your "Nana."
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